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Thank U 2 da dead
Contributed by: ashley Davis on 9/18/2006

Thank you 4 fighting
4 r freedon!
I wish I could thank u
face 2 face
bt I cnt bcuz ur gone
2 a better world!
A world with no violence.
A world of love and happiness.
A world without sin!
A world where u'r loved right as u get pass
da gates of heaven!!
A world of harmony & peace!
Yes, we miss u bt we know u'r in a better place.
We know we will b dar and we hope 2 C U
on a grassy hill of heaven
with daisies waitin patiently!
4 when we go 2 heaven it
is u I'll look for.



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Submitted By: Tabitha Dial
posted on 9/21/2006 @ 2:50:44 PM
Rated Story
Ashley, We'd love to know who it is you are talking about in the last line. Is there someone in particular who you know who is a soldier? That would be a great story to write to supplement your poetry. Thanks for posting.
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ashley Davis

Aurora , CO

ashley Davis has posted 1 story and 0 comments since joining on 9/18/2006. ashley Davis 's average story rating is 5.
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