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Colo. Prize Winner book on sale, prompts poetry
Contributed by: Tabitha Dial   on 11/8/2007

Craig Morgan Teicher's first book of poems, Brenda Is in the Room and Other Poems, was selected by Paul Hoover as winner of the 2007 Colorado Prize for Poetry. It is published by the Center for Literary Publishing at Colorado State University.

As an intern at the Center for Literary Publishing, I was honored to read a copy of the book before it went to the printer.

While reading it, I couldn't help thinking of prompts based on Teicher's poetry.











Eye Contact
From Brenda Is in the Room and Other Poems, copyright 2007 by Craig Morgan Teicher. Used by permission of the Center for Literary Publishing.

1

As if bees are known for their pride.

But what's so great about horses? They're stuck

on the earth except when they jump,


but even then they're not bees.

But is there anything we value so highly

as streetlights, which, unlike bees,


watch over us with their swan-like

necks and open their eyes at the right time

every night? The answer is lonely


and whoever among us is brave enough
to find it will come home to a family

that won't even look us in the eyes.


2


But what's so great about eye contact?

As if a horse knows a newspaper

when he sees it. Streetlights don't live


in hives; they're not more afraid
of us than we are, fortified by stingers and swarms.

Bees don't brighten the alleyways


in which we commit our most heinous crimes

to keep things moving and fill

the papers with news. Why don't we have


a holiday to recognize the alleyways?
The answer is lonely and whoever

among us is brave will have nowhere to jump.


3


Why don't we sing a song that makes

the bees proud? What's so great

about desolate meadows? The answer


is lonely.
Why don't we come home

and look at our family? Why don't we

designate an hour to brag about news?


What's so great about the way the papers

blow through alleyways in the evening

like deflated rats? As if pride could


brighten the meadows at night.
Whoever

among us is brave enough to forgive

a family gets to make eyes with a lonely horse.


4


As if the answer is flowers. As if

we could gather streetlights

in a bouquet from the alleyways


and brighten family after

beekeeping family. But what's so

great about seeing the truth?


Beneath every meadow is the Earth's

molten core, red and hot as an evil eye.

Why don't we blow through the streets


at night? The answer is lonely, even

if a horse knows the way home.

What's so great about being brave?



Eye Contact Prompt: Write four brief poems, using any form you like (if you can't pick one, use the one Teicher used in Eye Contact), that connect to one another, repeating concepts related to four specifics things, like bees, horses ... Re-use at least two of the verbs from your first poem in all four of your poems and see how everything relates to each other. As with writing all poetry, try not to think or self-edit too much. You can always worry about details when it's time to revise.

Teicher also wrote a poem called Ten Movies and Books, which you can read in Brenda Is in the Room and Other Poems. For fun (and perhaps to help pass the time while you wait for your copy of Teicher's book), here's the prompt that came my way when I read Teicher's Ten Movies and Books.

Ten Movies and Books Prompt: What are ten things you have learned from the movies? Some of these things can be lines that are worth reflecting on. Try mixing childhood experiences with more recent memories related to characters and plot. Feel free to also share your feelings about a movie or book. You can mention themes, use the phrases that begin or end the movies and books you have selected -- maybe you ruin the ending and confess that to the audience ... maybe you just summarize a film or book (there can be poetry in that). Who introduced you to these movies and books? They may be part of the poem, too.

About Teicher: Teicher's book, Brenda Is in the Room and Other Poems, is available now. New poems are appearing in jubilat, A Public Space, VQR and Post Road. He lives in Brooklyn, NY, with his wife and son.




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Submitted By: Tabitha Dial
posted on 11/9/2007 @ 7:57:19 AM
Rated Blog Entry
Thanks, Jesse. Can't believe you've registered! :-P
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posted on 11/8/2007 @ 10:29:50 PM
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interesting :)
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