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Such a beautiful thing that wasn't meant to be...

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Contributed by: Danielle O'Neill on 6/17/2007

" Thank you for this moment... Do you realize how beautiful you are?"

The words of a Past loVe. My 1st to be exact. I remember everything about the way he said those words, He made me melt, it's what made me fall for him. We were dancing beneath the stars, He kissed me on the forehead and he promised He would never Let me go. He wasn't perfect, Thank god, Perfection is false in every way. Flaws make the abnormal, seem everything and beyond.

He was everything I always wanted, or thought I wanted. In the beginning I could swear time stopped. As he released my every worry, doubt, and Aches. He made shure I was truly ready before we took our relationship to a intimate level.

8 months later I dont know what happened, I believe we got too comfrontable with each other, if that makes any sense. In the end it wasn't meant to be, Sometimes it still gets me... How you can LoVe someone for so long and know everything about them, and then one day you wake up and you suddenly find your self falling out of loVe.

Thats what happened to the both of us, neither wrong or right. To a certain extent I will always LoVe him, for the reason of him supporting me and giving me the Life I wanted back in Rockford, IL. I will always have these memories and will tresure them to the end.

Of Course Love hurts... The entire time I was with him I had in the back of my heart a feeling that one day it would come crashing down, I didnt want to believe it... but it was true. when it did happen....it felt as if I was suffocating, and my heart was on fire. it's like this song lyric quote. " You can LoVe someone for all the right reasons and your all, and at any moment they can choose to walk away... but you love them anyways."

you build a relationship with someone knowing how much it will hurt in the end...

I still have breakdowns everyonce in awhile... 2 me thats okay, too me its how I heal, how I let go ...

The problem was also was we were young, and on our own... 2 much freedom, 2 much partying... 2 MANY Hangovers... :) :( :X :)

during all of that though I didnt realize at the moment I learned most about where I belonged. Responsibilty and the sacrafices that come with being happy.

Some things you can Long for to happen, and once they do you have to expierence what you truly desire. to find out that it's not everything you thought it would be... easier said than living it and making it possible.

I think I went back "home" as a "Rebel without a cause"
Came back as 2ce mature. and ready to give Colorado the chance that I should've
3 years ago. I'm not saying that Co is my home, Rockford will always be where I belong. but Colorado is my getaway state, my ticket into the creative "Danielle" Sometimes it's where my heart is...

" Be careful with your wishes, Wish hard enough it can come alive, before you know it you have no control." -

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Danielle O'Neill

Golden , CO

Danielle O'Neill has posted 4 stories and 0 comments since joining on 4/26/2007. Danielle O'Neill 's average story rating is 5.

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