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Blog Entry 83 of 196 Dial 'T' for Tabitha
I'm a bicycling poet who lived in Parker for several years and worked at YourHub.com, covering Parker and Franktown for two years.

I am studying poetry at CSU in the Master of Fine Arts program ...

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My book's condemned


Yes, you read it right. My book's condemned.

No, I'm not being negative, and yes, I do mean it. Literally condemned.

The whole thing's set in Hell. That's why.

And I think the hellish part of revising it is over. This morning I pushed on through the myth of the bathroom-humor god I created and I also finished chapter four. Of course these are revisions I did with my "bad handwroter"(Thank you, John Lennon) and I must transfer them to the computer, but I think the icky bit's over.

I was dreading two parts of revising my book. One was that an ex-boyfriend had been revising my book at one point and had made my minor god even more memorable. Afraid I had no right to use that material after the relationship ended badly (hellishly, perhaps?), it was difficult for me to work past the second chapter until more recently, when that ex and I have renewed our friendship and he's happy to let me use what I remember about his revision.

The other ugly obstacle of my manuscript has much less emotion tied to it. When I first started writing my book in December 2002, I thought it would be clever to put this at the end of each chapter:

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This is not clever, dear readers! After working more and more with the text before and after those asteriks, they turned into these lines of black boxes that I never thought I could delete.

I thought I'd tried everything.

But having had this job at YourHub.com, a couple text solutions come to mind-- I will copy and pasteeverything into Notepad and then copy and paste the manuscript into a new document.

Failing that, I'll copy and paste around the lines into a new document.

Failing that, I'll... I'll.... I'll keep working and ask for the help of everyone I know.

While I do have big challenges ahead, such as changing my ending and adding a subplot, I think my previous fears that this project would interfere with my job are pretty silly. If I was writing this book, yes. When I wrote it, it spilled over into all aspects of my life and I even took notes during classes. I had a world and a story to create.

Now the task isn't so great.... This far in the game.

Thanks for the read. Now, won't you please post your story?

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I also have experienced the black boxes. Apparently they are supposed to make things easier instead of making you want to snap your keyboard over your knee like a dry stick. Grr...

Creatimony... indeed. Like that word... Stephanie, Alex was able to fit it... with some formatting/shading feature.

I have made those black lines out of asterisks. Not fair are they. Try turning off smart quotes...also, don't hit Enter after you make them. How can you not hit enter you may ask? Well, I can't help you with that.

Would that be Hell, MI? Just kidding -- and I am glad you rekindled your friendship with the ex, but I would have used the part regardless, considering it, uh, creatimony?
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