register |  login
Loading Ad
ADVERTISEMENT
Loading Tower

Bus 148, 6:47 a.m.
Contributed by: Dalton Kuspa on 4/19/2007

Bus 148, 6:47 a.m.

Father time is never punctual when a bitter wind pummels you in the face. When it licks your lips and kisses you on the cheek and you go frigid inside, all you crave is heat-- or death.

When the trees are drowned in ice and the windows of water are plated with frost, the cold is unstoppable. When it burns to breathe and feeling is lost where it should be found, the cold is unstoppable. When the leaves shatter and the rocks crumble, the cold is unstoppable.

The breath of death flows freely in an icy world.

The stares of those with the unblemished bodies and the pristine faces pummel you. The snickers they protrude and the comments they mean for you to hear lick your lips, and it is their smiles and blind eyes that kiss your cheek as you grow frigid inside.

When your eyes are drowned with tears and the mirrors of truth crack, you become stoppable. When it burns to speak of your reality and acceptance and awareness become jaded, you become stoppable. When your world shatters from words and glances, you become stoppable.

The breath of death flows freely in an icy world.




SUBMIT COMMENT

Rate the above story



Current Rating

Based on 1 user ratings.

Talk Back : submit comments to the story

*Note: you need to log-in to add a comment or rating.

Showing 1 of 1 comments
Submitted By: Kristin Osani
posted on 5/17/2007 @ 7:26:03 PM
Rated Story
Dalton, this is so cool! I absolutely love your word choice and how the sentences flow so smoothly.
Showing 1 of 1 comments
CONTRIBUTOR INFORMATION

Dalton Kuspa

Parker , CO

Dalton Kuspa has posted 1 story and 0 comments since joining on 4/19/2007. Dalton Kuspa 's average story rating is 5.
SAVE AND SHARE THIS STORY
STORY RSS FEEDS
WANT TO WRITE FOR YOURHUB.COM?
Want to see the stories you write and the photos you shoot featured in the YourHub.com Thursday print section available all over the Front Range and with home subscriptions of the Rocky Mountain News and The Denver Post? All you have to do is register, then post a story or column, start a blog or tell everyone what events are happening in town. We will print the best stories, columns, event listings, photos and blog entries in our print sections.

ADVERTISEMENT
Loading Ad

Loading Ad
ADVERTISEMENT
Loading Ad